Talk:Iamdb / Wikimedia Mobile Engineering

Structure of the page

The current structure in this draft is better than the one at Wikimedia Mobile engineering.

• Purpose - Your first paragraph could be adapted to efine clearly the purpose of the team.
• Team - see how Design or Engineering Community Team create their gallery. The team members and the names of their images can be found here under Mobile - Web - Apps - Partners.
• Projects - ok
• Get Involved - ok
• Learn More - This section seems too vague. Let's remove it.
• Contact Us - ok.

--Qgil (talk) 18:00, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

Corrections

This is a list of little problems that should be fixed:

• There are many full URLs in that page. It's not necessary, they can be just page titles linking to those pages. What is more, the abuse of full URLs makes you create tables to make them look better. There is no need for that either. For instance, the table at Iamdb_/_Wikimedia_Mobile_Engineering#Download could be solved with a very simple bullet list. For instance: iOS (source).
• Internal and external links. All links points to mediawiki.org pages should use [[Internal page|this format]], [https://www.mediawiki.org/wiki/Internal_page not this one]
• The Wikipedia Zero table is huge. There is no need to have it here. I guess you took it from another page? Note that whenever you duplicate information you will need to update it twice. Let's remove it.
• Correct punctuation. Commas, dots, colons, etc follow always the same simple format: no space before (they are placed at the end of the last word) and one space after, to separate from the next word

--Qgil (talk) 18:17, 22 November 2013 (UTC)